Aakhiri Alvida
April 13th, 2010
After a recent loss in the family earlier this week, I was thinking about some things and all of a sudden some words came to the confines of my mind, and a Nazm was born. A rushed recitation also follows below.
Peace to all~
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on 15 Apr 2010 at 3:19 am 1.Yogesh Dhar said …
A touchy one!
on 12 Jun 2010 at 3:50 pm 2.manoj said …
Your nazm goes from one heart straight to other.
Feel like listening till all words are strolling in my mind.
Just great !
on 11 Oct 2010 at 3:31 am 3.sunil said …
words did touched my heart good effort Buddy keep it up
on 08 Nov 2010 at 2:09 am 4.h k razdan 'raaz' said …
wo jo shakhs ham ko aziz tha , use kya hua wo kahan gaya
ai, Khuda zara sa tokuchh bata , use kya hua wokahan gaya
use dekh paaun main ek nazar, mahaz ek nazar, faqat ek nazar
ho wahaan ka koi to raasta , use kya hua, wo kahaan gaya
wo jo umra bhar mere saath tha, meri roz jis se thi guftgu
mujhe aik baar to de sadaa , use kya hua wo kahaan gaya
wo gaya hai kaun si raah se ke nahin hai aane ka raasta
jo gaya to kyuon nahin aa saka, use kya hua wo kahaan gaya
jo chala gaya so chala gaya , wo jo rah gaya hai wo kya kare
wo to jab bhi dekho hai sochta , use kya hua wo kahaan gaya
badi beadab hai ye maut bhi ke bina bataaye hi aaye hai
jo bhi iss ke saath chala gaya , use kya hua wo kahaan gaya
h k razdan ‘raaz’
on 08 Nov 2010 at 7:58 am 5.Gautam said …
Raaz sahab. Ghazal share karne ka shukriya!!
on 23 Nov 2011 at 5:55 am 6.H.K.Razdan'raaz' said …
Shukriya Janab Gautam Sahab; aap ko ghazal pasaNd aayi
razdan ‘raaz’