After a recent loss in the family earlier this week, I was thinking about some things and all of a sudden some words came to the confines of my mind, and a Nazm was born. A rushed recitation also follows below.
Peace to all~
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A touchy one!
Your nazm goes from one heart straight to other.
Feel like listening till all words are strolling in my mind.
Just great !
words did touched my heart good effort Buddy keep it up
wo jo shakhs ham ko aziz tha , use kya hua wo kahan gaya
ai, Khuda zara sa tokuchh bata , use kya hua wokahan gaya
use dekh paaun main ek nazar, mahaz ek nazar, faqat ek nazar
ho wahaan ka koi to raasta , use kya hua, wo kahaan gaya
wo jo umra bhar mere saath tha, meri roz jis se thi guftgu
mujhe aik baar to de sadaa , use kya hua wo kahaan gaya
wo gaya hai kaun si raah se ke nahin hai aane ka raasta
jo gaya to kyuon nahin aa saka, use kya hua wo kahaan gaya
jo chala gaya so chala gaya , wo jo rah gaya hai wo kya kare
wo to jab bhi dekho hai sochta , use kya hua wo kahaan gaya
badi beadab hai ye maut bhi ke bina bataaye hi aaye hai
jo bhi iss ke saath chala gaya , use kya hua wo kahaan gaya
h k razdan ‘raaz’
Raaz sahab. Ghazal share karne ka shukriya!!
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razdan ‘raaz’
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razdan ‘raaz’