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Ik Lamha ‘Zafar’

3 comments Urdu/Hindi Poetry 1,736 views

Oct 26 2005

I wrote the ‘Maqta’ of this Ghazal after meeting someone for the very first time. Luckily now she’s a good friend of mine. I won’t give the name out though 🙂 Ghazal shauq farmiaaye.

Ik Lamha

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  • Jay Vidhani 2 June, 2010 at 3:55 pm

    Nice work. But according to me, 4th and 5th stanza (or whatever you call it), do not belong here. That’s just me. For more about me, check your site iktara.us. In case you don’t get my message over there, just mail me, i’ll get back to you.

    Keep up the good work. Tk care.

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  • Gautam 2 June, 2010 at 4:08 pm

    Thanks for stopping by Jay. Ghazal transcends the boundary of belonging and each Sher is a poem in itself. If you follow different realms of Urdu Poetry, you’d get my meaning.

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  • Peter 22 September, 2011 at 7:25 am

    The seventh sher says “bi chus koshur”. Have you written anything in that most beautiful language?

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