Urdu/Hindi Poetry Ik Lamha ‘Zafar’ Posted on 26 October, 20054 January, 2008 by Gautam | This article has 1,893 views I wrote the ‘Maqta’ of this Ghazal after meeting someone for the very first time. Luckily now she’s a good friend of mine. I won’t give the name out though 🙂 Ghazal shauq farmiaaye.
Nice work. But according to me, 4th and 5th stanza (or whatever you call it), do not belong here. That’s just me. For more about me, check your site iktara.us. In case you don’t get my message over there, just mail me, i’ll get back to you.
Keep up the good work. Tk care.
Thanks for stopping by Jay. Ghazal transcends the boundary of belonging and each Sher is a poem in itself. If you follow different realms of Urdu Poetry, you’d get my meaning.
The seventh sher says “bi chus koshur”. Have you written anything in that most beautiful language?