Benaam Nazm
The first 2 lines showed up in my mind last night around the midnight hour and this morning, I was able to pen down a Nazm, which I will call Benaam Nazm as I was unable to give it a name, for it was never born and it shall never die. It’s been almost 4 months since I wrote Inqalaab Sulagta Hai Kahin in October. Nevertheless, a fleeting verse never forgets to pay me a visit every now and then.
A quick recitation to go along in my rather cough-ish voice.
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Your temporary raspy voice has enhanced the charm of the Nazm.
Sahi hai Zafar sahab!…
Very nice Zafar sahab. It isnt for the reader to suggest to the Poet, but I wish you would add some more in the middle of the nazm — nashaa kuch aur zaada ho…. It started and ended too quickly for me.
One other nit, can the notes be in urdu script as well.
bahot khoob zafar sahab…..
kya aap facebook pe ho.
Gautamji,
very nice nazm but…….om