Started writing this on the midnight of 11th December and recorded a sketch version the next morning. Just a folk poem with a simple melody. Still working out the chinks in the music.
Hope you mates enjoy it!
Words:
Now I’ve come to the cross-roads
In my life and I will say
I still dream of tomorrow
When the stars will show the way
Yes I say
Now we stand here together
Still apart, so far away
There’s a time there’s a season
When the feeling must go away
Yes I say
Oh the valleys and the sea
I long to be in arms of thee
I’ll sail away – hey wild and free
When the rain comes-a-calling
At my door – Yes I’ll sing
Sing to you – there’s a story
Of a Maiden & the king
Yes I’ll sing
Oh the forest and the stream
I wish I were in arms of thee
I’ll sing along, come sing with me
Here I stand at the cross-roads
In my life and I must say
I still dream of tomorrow
When forever we will stay
Yes I say.
-Gautam Dhar (12th Dec. 2009, Mountain View, CA)
just great….!
regards………………
Nice!…
Yes, I say this is a nice poem/song by you! Best wishes to you!
Gattu – nice meop
Love to watch this journey of a poet’s heart.
I just wanna say you have another brother with you any time in crossroads of life a mail away………..
Wish you great strength and hope you come up with something special in life………………
Thanks everyone! Thanks Dalla sab. Hope all’s well!!
keep going !!! all the best for 2010.
It was wonderful…