Aakhiri Alvida

Apr 13 2010

After a recent loss in the family earlier this week, I was thinking about some things and all of a sudden some words came to the confines of my mind, and a Nazm was born. A rushed recitation also follows below.
Peace to all~

Comments So Far..
  • Yogesh Dhar 15 April, 2010 at 3:19 am

    A touchy one!

  • manoj 12 June, 2010 at 3:50 pm

    Your nazm goes from one heart straight to other.

    Feel like listening till all words are strolling in my mind.

    Just great !

  • sunil 11 October, 2010 at 3:31 am

    words did touched my heart good effort Buddy keep it up

  • h k razdan 'raaz' 8 November, 2010 at 2:09 am

    wo jo shakhs ham ko aziz tha , use kya hua wo kahan gaya
    ai, Khuda zara sa tokuchh bata , use kya hua wokahan gaya

    use dekh paaun main ek nazar, mahaz ek nazar, faqat ek nazar
    ho wahaan ka koi to raasta , use kya hua, wo kahaan gaya

    wo jo umra bhar mere saath tha, meri roz jis se thi guftgu
    mujhe aik baar to de sadaa , use kya hua wo kahaan gaya

    wo gaya hai kaun si raah se ke nahin hai aane ka raasta
    jo gaya to kyuon nahin aa saka, use kya hua wo kahaan gaya

    jo chala gaya so chala gaya , wo jo rah gaya hai wo kya kare
    wo to jab bhi dekho hai sochta , use kya hua wo kahaan gaya

    badi beadab hai ye maut bhi ke bina bataaye hi aaye hai
    jo bhi iss ke saath chala gaya , use kya hua wo kahaan gaya

    h k razdan ‘raaz’

  • Gautam 8 November, 2010 at 7:58 am

    Raaz sahab. Ghazal share karne ka shukriya!!

  • H.K.Razdan'raaz' 23 November, 2011 at 5:55 am

    Shukriya Janab Gautam Sahab; aap ko ghazal pasaNd aayi

    razdan ‘raaz’

  • H. K. Razdan 'raaz' 3 July, 2013 at 6:50 pm

    If interested in reading more of my poetry in Urdu and hindi scripts, please visit and

    razdan ‘raaz’

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