Benaam Nazm

The first 2 lines showed up in my mind last night around the midnight hour and this morning, I was able to pen down a Nazm, which I will call Benaam Nazm as I was unable to give it a name, for it was never born and it shall never die. It’s been almost 4 months since I wrote Inqalaab Sulagta Hai Kahin in October. Nevertheless, a fleeting verse never forgets to pay me a visit every now and then.

A quick recitation to go along in my rather cough-ish voice.

[audio:http://gdhar.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/BenaamNazm.mp3]

Benaam Nazm

Comments So Far..
  • Anupam Dhar 21 February, 2010 at 9:25 am

    Your temporary raspy voice has enhanced the charm of the Nazm.

  • Saumya G 21 February, 2010 at 9:34 am

    Sahi hai Zafar sahab!…

  • Arun 24 February, 2010 at 2:21 pm

    Very nice Zafar sahab. It isnt for the reader to suggest to the Poet, but I wish you would add some more in the middle of the nazm — nashaa kuch aur zaada ho…. It started and ended too quickly for me.

    One other nit, can the notes be in urdu script as well.

  • ATIULLAH 2 April, 2010 at 8:26 am

    bahot khoob zafar sahab…..
    kya aap facebook pe ho.

  • raju 12 January, 2014 at 6:30 am

    Gautamji,
    very nice nazm but…….om

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