Comments on: Mashq e Sukhan http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/ Tue, 22 May 2012 15:54:43 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: akaul http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/#comment-10484 akaul Sat, 11 Apr 2009 16:10:26 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=460#comment-10484 Wordly love can be like an ocean.Yet , the ocean has a bottom. Divine love is like the sky..limitless , infinite. From the bottom of the ocean , let's soar into the vast sky !!!! Wordly love can be like an ocean.Yet , the ocean has a bottom.
Divine love is like the sky..limitless , infinite.
From the bottom of the ocean , let’s soar into the vast sky !!!!

]]> By: nadeem http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/#comment-10478 nadeem Sat, 04 Apr 2009 08:58:34 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=460#comment-10478 bohat umda jigar kishayeri aisa lagta hai jaise mehboob se guftgu ho rahi hai. bohat umda jigar kishayeri aisa lagta hai jaise mehboob se guftgu ho rahi hai.

]]> By: Gautam http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/#comment-10393 Gautam Thu, 15 Jan 2009 19:12:14 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=460#comment-10393 This is pretty good Nikhil. Thanks for sharing it with everyone. This is pretty good Nikhil. Thanks for sharing it with everyone.

]]> By: Nik http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/#comment-10392 Nik Thu, 15 Jan 2009 18:54:22 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=460#comment-10392 Khair jitni samajh mei aayi utni to umdaa thi ... posting here one gibberish I wrote some days back ... take it as moral booster and get out of Maut ki Gaarein (lol) Phir wahi sawal Har khwahish har armaan, teri chaukhat pe aake rukta hai wahi purana baarish ka mausam Phir gungunane ki chaah rakhta hai Teri dhoop mei baitha hun ek patli chaadar odh ke Baadlon ne kuch chaanv bikheri To tera sooraj takta hai Dekhte dekhte shaam hui to tune sooraj bhuja diya Raat ko thoda rangeen banane ko ek chaand jagmaga diya Kuch hairat hai par Gairat hai yeh nahi koi ayyari Meri deewar par teri tasveer ki hai kuch yeh karagari Bunta hun phir soch mei tera ek aur khayal Kya tha pahle se yah behtar Karta khud se phir wahi sawal Khair jitni samajh mei aayi utni to umdaa thi … posting here one gibberish I wrote some days back … take it as moral booster and get out of Maut ki Gaarein (lol)

Phir wahi sawal

Har khwahish har armaan,
teri chaukhat pe aake rukta hai
wahi purana baarish ka mausam
Phir gungunane ki chaah rakhta hai

Teri dhoop mei baitha hun
ek patli chaadar odh ke
Baadlon ne kuch chaanv bikheri
To tera sooraj takta hai

Dekhte dekhte shaam hui
to tune sooraj bhuja diya
Raat ko thoda rangeen banane
ko ek chaand jagmaga diya

Kuch hairat hai par Gairat hai
yeh nahi koi ayyari
Meri deewar par teri tasveer
ki hai kuch yeh karagari

Bunta hun phir soch mei
tera ek aur khayal
Kya tha pahle se yah behtar
Karta khud se phir wahi sawal

]]> By: Nik http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/#comment-10391 Nik Thu, 15 Jan 2009 18:50:22 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=460#comment-10391 bhai yeh zara layman language mei bhi likh do dubara ... jo hum jaise tucchh praniyo ke samajh mei bhi aaye hehe bhai yeh zara layman language mei bhi likh do dubara … jo hum jaise tucchh praniyo ke samajh mei bhi aaye hehe

]]> By: Tej Mehta http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/#comment-10387 Tej Mehta Wed, 14 Jan 2009 02:15:23 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=460#comment-10387 Dear Gautam, Thanks for reconnecting. 'Mashq-e-Sukhan' is a solid composition with a lot of depth. It is literary in its choice of verse and intense in its appeal. Indeed its overwhelming. AAFREEN !! AAFREEN !! Continue with all your passion. Uncle Dear Gautam,
Thanks for reconnecting. ‘Mashq-e-Sukhan’ is a solid composition
with a lot of depth. It is literary in its choice of verse and intense
in its appeal. Indeed its overwhelming.
AAFREEN !! AAFREEN !! Continue with all your passion.
Uncle

]]> By: Saumya http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/#comment-10384 Saumya Mon, 12 Jan 2009 14:41:55 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=460#comment-10384 Badhiya hai, Zafar sahab!.... Badhiya hai, Zafar sahab!….

]]> By: Gautam http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/#comment-10382 Gautam Mon, 12 Jan 2009 06:44:41 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=460#comment-10382 Thanks Dhar Sahab. Janki, good to hear from you and thanks for reading :) Thanks Dhar Sahab. Janki, good to hear from you and thanks for reading :)

]]> By: Janki http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/#comment-10381 Janki Mon, 12 Jan 2009 04:41:16 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=460#comment-10381 wow..if it took me this long to read and actually understand it (thanks for the notes!)...I can only imagine..how much thought it takes to write one! heavy hai :)... can't wait for the recording... Happy New Year! wow..if it took me this long to read and actually understand it (thanks for the notes!)…I can only imagine..how much thought it takes to write one! heavy hai :) …
can’t wait for the recording…
Happy New Year!

]]> By: anupam dhar http://gdhar.com/2009/01/11/mashq-e-sukhan/#comment-10377 anupam dhar Mon, 12 Jan 2009 02:28:59 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=460#comment-10377 This one shows signs of progressive maturity in your poetry. No kid stuff here. "Lage Raho Shayar Bhai". This one shows signs of progressive maturity in your poetry. No kid stuff here.
“Lage Raho Shayar Bhai”.

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