Comments on: Wo Khat http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/ Fri, 30 Jul 2010 10:55:11 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Gautam http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/#comment-10432 Gautam Fri, 13 Feb 2009 22:35:48 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=446#comment-10432 I'll take that as a compliment Vaibhav :) I’ll take that as a compliment Vaibhav :)

]]> By: vaibhav http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/#comment-10431 vaibhav Fri, 13 Feb 2009 22:22:49 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=446#comment-10431 nice poem. Your style of writing is bit similar with Great Gulzaarsaabs one. Thanks and keep this going on.Awaiting for your next poem. nice poem. Your style of writing is bit similar with Great Gulzaarsaabs one.

Thanks and keep this going on.Awaiting for your next poem.

]]> By: Gautam http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/#comment-10099 Gautam Tue, 14 Oct 2008 03:44:08 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=446#comment-10099 Bahut khoob samar! Bahut khoob samar!

]]> By: Samar http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/#comment-10096 Samar Tue, 14 Oct 2008 03:06:01 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=446#comment-10096 Cha(n)d Purze Hi Bache Hein tere haathon ke likhe Darta hoon aaoge tum yaad jo parhoonga inko Cha(n)d Purze Hi Bache Hein tere haathon ke likhe
Darta hoon aaoge tum yaad jo parhoonga inko

]]> By: Gautam http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/#comment-9389 Gautam Tue, 19 Aug 2008 18:37:03 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=446#comment-9389 Thanks for sharing them Anita ji Thanks for sharing them Anita ji

]]> By: akaul http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/#comment-9381 akaul Tue, 19 Aug 2008 11:01:17 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=446#comment-9381 gautam ji, yeh lines bas humari instant hai apki nescafe instant ki tarah !!! gautam ji, yeh lines bas humari instant hai apki nescafe instant ki tarah !!!

]]> By: Journey Into A Poet’s Heart » Khudkushi http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/#comment-9377 Journey Into A Poet’s Heart » Khudkushi Tue, 19 Aug 2008 06:55:50 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=446#comment-9377 [...] I picked up (or my pen did) from where I had left and ended up with Khudkushi. After writing Wo Khat, I am glad I was able to write something [...] [...] I picked up (or my pen did) from where I had left and ended up with Khudkushi. After writing Wo Khat, I am glad I was able to write something [...]

]]> By: Gautam http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/#comment-9366 Gautam Mon, 18 Aug 2008 14:39:11 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=446#comment-9366 Good one! thanks for sharing. Good one! thanks for sharing.

]]> By: anupam dhar http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/#comment-9360 anupam dhar Mon, 18 Aug 2008 12:10:13 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=446#comment-9360 The first four stanzas of the ghazal are: Sunhere waqt ki parchainyya hai Bahut sahmee huee sacchaiyyan hai Samundar pee gaya sehra ka paani Pashemaan aaj tak gehrayian hai Ab aise log hain uncchaiyon par Nazar se gir gayen, uncchaiyan hain Burayee kaa bada hai kad yakeenan Magar zinda abhi acchayian hai. MRIDUL TIWARI The first four stanzas of the ghazal are:

Sunhere waqt ki parchainyya hai
Bahut sahmee huee sacchaiyyan hai

Samundar pee gaya sehra ka paani
Pashemaan aaj tak gehrayian hai

Ab aise log hain uncchaiyon par
Nazar se gir gayen, uncchaiyan hain

Burayee kaa bada hai kad yakeenan
Magar zinda abhi acchayian hai.

MRIDUL TIWARI

]]> By: Gautam http://gdhar.com/2008/08/15/wo-khat/#comment-9357 Gautam Mon, 18 Aug 2008 05:20:51 +0000 http://gdhar.com/?p=446#comment-9357 Thanks Anita Ji. Dhar Sahab, who are these lines by? Thanks Anita Ji. Dhar Sahab, who are these lines by?

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