Sargoshiyan - Revival
June 9th, 2008
I wrote this revival version couple days after I wrote Sargoshiyan. I’m not sure if I’m using the correct term, but I pretty much revived the same tune in a slower and melancholy way. I guess when it’s time to say Goodbye, I can sing this song. I wasn’t sure if I wanted to record it, but when I had a few lines down, I decided to do it anyways. Here is the MP3.
I am putting a very rough English version of the song. Of course translating takes away the essence of a song, but just so my non-Hindi speaking readers can understand. Sargoshiyan means whispers.
Sargoshiyan (Revival)
And so I say goodbye with a smile
But you mustn’t weep O my heart
I shall leave all my cares and woes
And these memories that linger on
Guess I’ll have to say in a song
What words just could not say
These petty goals of life
They just won’t make me stay
Alone I was and so I’ll be
O loneliness, it’s you and I
And so I’ll leave this world behind
With nothing but a song,
A song and a sigh.
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on 09 Jun 2008 at 10:31 pm 1.anupam dhar said …
Very correctly tuned and delivered. Next time try to keep the recording mike closer because the verse in this case should override the tune. The verse is fit to be delivered in a “mehfil e jaam.”
on 09 Jun 2008 at 10:36 pm 2.Janki said …
u did it! love it….
on 10 Jun 2008 at 1:29 am 3.Milton Roy 'rahbar' said …
Hi Gautam Dhar, I listened to your rendition of ’sargoshian’
liked it. Carry on….
on 10 Jun 2008 at 8:11 am 4.lavanya / लावण्या, said …
You Did it !!
Liked this version a lot …
God bless …
on 10 Jun 2008 at 9:01 am 5.Gudiya said …
Wonderful .. you were right, this is a better version … lyrics are beautiful .. keep it up
on 10 Jun 2008 at 9:07 am 6.Supriya Kaul said …
Hi Again, You have a soothing voice. Loved this song ….
on 10 Jun 2008 at 9:41 am 7.Justin said …
That is really good Rusty! I have no idea what you are singing, but its got such a calming affect. I can safely say that you are now the master.
Glad to see you keep on keepin on.
on 10 Jun 2008 at 11:42 am 8.Brandon said …
Excellent song, and a terrific recording. Deserves a video!
on 10 Jun 2008 at 12:09 pm 9.Gautam said …
Thanks everyone for listening and comments/suggestions. Thanks Supriya
Justin, thanks for coming by man. Hope the music scene’s going well in Lansing.
on 10 Jun 2008 at 3:21 pm 10.Journey Into A Poet’s Heart » Blog Archive » Sargoshiyan said …
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on 11 Jun 2008 at 9:35 pm 11.Kaumudee said …
Wow kid you did WAYYY good…I’m truly blown away. Keep up the good work.
on 19 Jun 2008 at 7:56 pm 12.Michael said …
Wow….that was great, very beautiful!
on 21 Jun 2008 at 1:18 am 13.Gautam said …
Thanks Michael!
on 01 Jul 2008 at 7:43 pm 14.lynn said …
inspiring and very lovely…..
on 09 Jul 2008 at 7:38 pm 15.Gautam said …
thanks lynn!
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