Comments on: Sargoshiyan

By: Gautam

Gautam — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 20:25:21 +0000

Thanks Rashmi, thanks Lavanya for your comments and suggestions.

By: lavanya / लावण्या,

lavanya / लावण्या, — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 13:08:00 +0000

Gautam,
Good singing, You have a natural lilt to your voice.Only suggestion i can give is to
force feeling of pathos, or virah in this particuler song to take it to the level of our legendry Rafi saab.
Try it …when u r in a sad mood.
Lyrics are apt. Tune, gives sukoon.
Keep writing n singing.
rgds,
L

By: Journey Into A Poet’s Heart » Blog Archive » Sargoshiyan - Revival

Tue, 10 Jun 2008 01:20:05 +0000

[...] wrote this revival version couple days after I wrote Sargoshiyan. I’m not sure if I’m using the correct term, but I pretty much revived the same tune in [...]

By: Gautam

Gautam — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 23:01:28 +0000

Shukriya Janki. Yea there are still a rough edges in the song. I actually recorded a revival version of the song, which I personally think turned a little better than the original song. Will put that one up too. Check back

By: Janki

Janki — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 22:30:58 +0000

dhun badi pyaari hai…suits this piece perfectly…
“mar ke yaha”…thoda smoothly lekar kaisa lagega?
can’t wait till ur next creation…
how’s the tripod? haven’t used mine yet…

By: Gautam

Gautam — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 18:45:30 +0000

Thanks everyone.

By: Gudiya

Gudiya — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 07:50:06 +0000

Well done !! Lets set up a studio .. !!

By: rashmi

rashmi — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 06:11:20 +0000

very nicely sung n guitar is fab !!!
Good work !

By: anupam dhar

anupam dhar — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 03:57:20 +0000

Yes. You did it right this time. Pleasing lines. Lilting tune with right notes from the wires.
Great job. Keep it up.