Mayoosi
March 11th, 2008
Haven’t had a chance to write or record anything in last 3 weeks due to my move from Michigan to California. Google is keeping me busy and other than getting lost on Cali roads once in a while, things are going well.
Last night I wrote a Nazm before going to bed around Midnight. Nothing autobiographical (finally for a change), but does reflect plight of someone I knew.. Enjoy.
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on 11 Mar 2008 at 9:56 pm 1.sapna kaul said …
sublime .. well put !! i could relate with it ..
on 11 Mar 2008 at 10:00 pm 2.Gautam said …
thanks for reading..
on 11 Mar 2008 at 11:35 pm 3.anupam dhar said …
Bhai Kya Baat Hai !!!! Dekhaa Hai Oonth Pahad Ke Neeche Pehli Baar!
As a poet, it is essential to look outwards and within in equal measure.
Lage Raho Gautam Bhai !!
QUOTE OF THE DAY:-
“Writing a book of poetry is like dropping a rose petal down the Grand Canyon and waiting for the echo.”
–Don Marquis–
Last stanza first line sixth word. Never heard of it. Please enlighten.
on 12 Mar 2008 at 9:04 am 4.sapna kaul said …
Answer to Uncle’s question: vagarna … crude form of varna
.. wow i am learning
on 12 Mar 2008 at 9:29 am 5.Gautam said …
Vagarna = Varna
Varna is a corrupted form of vagarna. If you read urdu poetry, you’d always
find vagarna, not varna.
Same as Taaluq as we speak as compared to Tau’aalluk (correct pronunciation)
Sapna, it’s not crude, but pure form rather