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		<title>By: Manisha</title>
		<link>http://gdhar.com/2006/01/08/raincoat-a-poem-by-gulzar/#comment-11605</link>
		<dc:creator>Manisha</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 12 Jun 2010 00:26:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Gautam: 

Thank you for posting such a beautiful poem by Gulzar. I agree, translating Gulzars poem is a mission impossible. Having said that, I would like to take a stab at it :).  Here&#039;s my attempt and before I forget, I would like to thank a friend (you know who you are) for the finishing touch.



It was season&#039;s
sudden gust of wind
that skewed the portrait
hung on this wall

In monsoons prior
these walls were not so damp
Wonder why this time 
humidity crept in,
cracks developed,
and dampness seeped through
Dewy tears gliding over dry cheeks

The rains used to sing
on this very rooftop
And write sweet nothings
with its fingertips
on window panes of this house.

Now lamenting behind unlit lanterns
afternoons feel like an empty chess set
without pieces
There are no players for a match
and no moves to be made
Neither the day dawns nor the night falls
Everything is at a standstill.

Oh what a gust of wind it was
that skewed the portrait
hung on this wall.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gautam: </p>
<p>Thank you for posting such a beautiful poem by Gulzar. I agree, translating Gulzars poem is a mission impossible. Having said that, I would like to take a stab at it <img src='http://gdhar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> .  Here&#8217;s my attempt and before I forget, I would like to thank a friend (you know who you are) for the finishing touch.</p>
<p>It was season&#8217;s<br />
sudden gust of wind<br />
that skewed the portrait<br />
hung on this wall</p>
<p>In monsoons prior<br />
these walls were not so damp<br />
Wonder why this time<br />
humidity crept in,<br />
cracks developed,<br />
and dampness seeped through<br />
Dewy tears gliding over dry cheeks</p>
<p>The rains used to sing<br />
on this very rooftop<br />
And write sweet nothings<br />
with its fingertips<br />
on window panes of this house.</p>
<p>Now lamenting behind unlit lanterns<br />
afternoons feel like an empty chess set<br />
without pieces<br />
There are no players for a match<br />
and no moves to be made<br />
Neither the day dawns nor the night falls<br />
Everything is at a standstill.</p>
<p>Oh what a gust of wind it was<br />
that skewed the portrait<br />
hung on this wall.</p>
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		<title>By: Gautam</title>
		<link>http://gdhar.com/2006/01/08/raincoat-a-poem-by-gulzar/#comment-10839</link>
		<dc:creator>Gautam</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 31 Jul 2009 13:04:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for your rendition, Sujit.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for your rendition, Sujit.</p>
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		<title>By: Sujit</title>
		<link>http://gdhar.com/2006/01/08/raincoat-a-poem-by-gulzar/#comment-10835</link>
		<dc:creator>Sujit</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Jul 2009 13:06:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>May I tweak it a bit more, with your permission

Was it a puff of the season
That shook the portrait hanging listlessly
Last season the walls weren’t so moist
Who knows why it crept in now
Don’t know why the cracks came
And the damp shows
Like the tears on a face so blank

This rain once sang on the rooftops
It used to write on the windowpanes

Alas it weeps away behind a cage now
And the afternoons are so
Like a chess without the pieces
There’s no one to play, no bets laid
Neither the day breaks, nor night comes
Everything seems still

Perhaps ’twas a puff of the season
That shook the portrait on this wall.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>May I tweak it a bit more, with your permission</p>
<p>Was it a puff of the season<br />
That shook the portrait hanging listlessly<br />
Last season the walls weren’t so moist<br />
Who knows why it crept in now<br />
Don’t know why the cracks came<br />
And the damp shows<br />
Like the tears on a face so blank</p>
<p>This rain once sang on the rooftops<br />
It used to write on the windowpanes</p>
<p>Alas it weeps away behind a cage now<br />
And the afternoons are so<br />
Like a chess without the pieces<br />
There’s no one to play, no bets laid<br />
Neither the day breaks, nor night comes<br />
Everything seems still</p>
<p>Perhaps ’twas a puff of the season<br />
That shook the portrait on this wall.</p>
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		<title>By: vaibhav</title>
		<link>http://gdhar.com/2006/01/08/raincoat-a-poem-by-gulzar/#comment-10430</link>
		<dc:creator>vaibhav</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 22:13:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Again an excellent peace of work by Gulzaarsaab.it go straight into heart.listening the same in gulzaarsaab soothings voice g8 experience.Also hats off for directors creativity to used the same in perfect scene in Raincoat.Ajay devgan and ash nice chemistry.love this movie too much.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Again an excellent peace of work by Gulzaarsaab.it go straight into heart.listening the same in gulzaarsaab soothings voice g8 experience.Also hats off for directors creativity to used the same in perfect scene in Raincoat.Ajay devgan and ash nice chemistry.love this movie too much.</p>
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		<title>By: Gautam</title>
		<link>http://gdhar.com/2006/01/08/raincoat-a-poem-by-gulzar/#comment-10</link>
		<dc:creator>Gautam</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Jun 2006 17:13:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Surely a great poem, senorita :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Surely a great poem, senorita <img src='http://gdhar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Se�orita</title>
		<link>http://gdhar.com/2006/01/08/raincoat-a-poem-by-gulzar/#comment-9</link>
		<dc:creator>Se�orita</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Jun 2006 09:57:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What a beautiful poem! Glad I saw ur post on an orkut community abt raincoat, which brought me here!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What a beautiful poem! Glad I saw ur post on an orkut community abt raincoat, which brought me here!</p>
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		<title>By: Anonymous</title>
		<link>http://gdhar.com/2006/01/08/raincoat-a-poem-by-gulzar/#comment-8</link>
		<dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Mar 2006 11:28:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>thats a real good one by gulzar saab..love the man in white.................


paromita</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>thats a real good one by gulzar saab..love the man in white&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;..</p>
<p>paromita</p>
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		<title>By: Poetry Lover</title>
		<link>http://gdhar.com/2006/01/08/raincoat-a-poem-by-gulzar/#comment-7</link>
		<dc:creator>Poetry Lover</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Jan 2006 06:09:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Gulzar says it all..</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gulzar says it all..</p>
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